Responding to First Cut Feeback

After the first cut feedback we decided to change certain aspects of the films however keep some aspects the same.

What We Changed :

1. We changed our titles to just a written format as when reflecting on it we understood why it was given criticism due to it looking unprofessional and slightly out of place.
2. We made sure our voiceover for our actual extract narrative would be more prominent and significant than we had originally planned.
3. Reduced the number of times the man blinked by cutting out scenes this also save filming time and prevented the running time of the product not being too long.