First Cut Feedback

After we had created our first cut we got feedback from our Peers who are of a the age of our target audience. Some comments from our feedback included :

•Our written titles were suggested to be changed to just ordinary text

•We were told our editing technique of modifying the voices worked well

•Our  peers said our extract narrative mad hard to understand without a voiceover

•  We were informed our idea was original and different and although is quite a complex idea was executed well.

• People said that the blinking element may be too repetitive therefore we are going to reduce this.
• The idents and editing of the use of editing techniques for the first scene were praised therefore we are going to keep this the same.